I took me awhile but I fixed the title sequence, all of the little things that bugged me i finally was able to sort them out. In particular i was able to fix the bird scene with bit of research and the falling scene by using the advice Conánn and Michael gave me with the background moving instead of the character. That and the timing issues i had previous with the typography i was able to fix.
Dragon Tree Title Sequence
So now the video is ready to put in the portfolio; Hurrah!